Post by Valandil on Jun 23, 2004 9:20:23 GMT -5
Yeah, that's right. Since the original was deleted, I am able to re-post this. I'm going to start from the beginning this time, not the middle. It might have been confusing to some of you. And now that I think of it, this part might still seem a little confusing, but whatever.
Please tell me what you think of it.
And yeah, it is really short, but whatever on that too.
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Pre-war
A pale man, tall and bulky, leaned back in a chair, while obviously during breakfast, was reading the paper. The cover of it was in color, showing a picture of a space transport being blown apart by a missile. The title above the picture read “Crises against Legionnaires, possible war to come.” There was much text underneath it.
“Looks like they’re at it again.” said the pale bulky man. “The United Planets Federation isn’t going to stand for this much longer. If they don’t back off, they’re going to be in a lot of trouble.”
“I don’t think so, haven’t we put up with them for this long because we won’t be able to do anything against them?” Said a short woman who had just entered the room.
“Well, what they don’t know, is that we’ve made something that would make their entire army quiver.”
“Really, now?” The woman asked in disbelief.
“Yeah, but I can’t tell you, it’s classified. But I can tell you this, if they don’t back off, the entire galaxy is going to know all about it.” The man said with a dead serious tone in his voice.
“Hm, I just hope it’s not a repeat of last time you all tried this.”
“It’s not going to be, don’t worry.” The man closed the paper and put it under his arm.
“Leaving so soon?” The lady asked.
The man looked at her for a second. “Yeah, I have things to do. Like my job.” With that, the man nodded his head towards her, and walked away.
As he reached the door, he heard something, lifted his head, and opened the door to walk outside.
Please tell me what you think of it.
And yeah, it is really short, but whatever on that too.
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Pre-war
A pale man, tall and bulky, leaned back in a chair, while obviously during breakfast, was reading the paper. The cover of it was in color, showing a picture of a space transport being blown apart by a missile. The title above the picture read “Crises against Legionnaires, possible war to come.” There was much text underneath it.
“Looks like they’re at it again.” said the pale bulky man. “The United Planets Federation isn’t going to stand for this much longer. If they don’t back off, they’re going to be in a lot of trouble.”
“I don’t think so, haven’t we put up with them for this long because we won’t be able to do anything against them?” Said a short woman who had just entered the room.
“Well, what they don’t know, is that we’ve made something that would make their entire army quiver.”
“Really, now?” The woman asked in disbelief.
“Yeah, but I can’t tell you, it’s classified. But I can tell you this, if they don’t back off, the entire galaxy is going to know all about it.” The man said with a dead serious tone in his voice.
“Hm, I just hope it’s not a repeat of last time you all tried this.”
“It’s not going to be, don’t worry.” The man closed the paper and put it under his arm.
“Leaving so soon?” The lady asked.
The man looked at her for a second. “Yeah, I have things to do. Like my job.” With that, the man nodded his head towards her, and walked away.
As he reached the door, he heard something, lifted his head, and opened the door to walk outside.
