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Post by MovieManiac on Jul 27, 2004 16:54:54 GMT -5
There was an old man named Michael Finnigan. He grew whiskers on his chin again. Shaved them off and had to begin again. Poor old Michael Finnigan.
One day as he was walking down thestreet he came across a boy with long hair. He beat him to death with his walking cane. The boy didn't die but was seriously injured. Then Spiderman came and beat the crap out of Michael Finigan. Then everyone did the Safety Dance.
THE END
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Post by MovieManiac on Aug 11, 2004 8:34:39 GMT -5
Why didnt anyone comment on this story? I mean, nobody even bothered to tell me to get a life this time. Someone please just tell me to shut the hell up or something.
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Post by JAGuar on Aug 11, 2004 13:13:57 GMT -5
Well, the jackasses on this board don't usually come this far down. That's just how it is. That's originally why I recruited xenith people, so they'd come here, but that plan soon blew up in my face.
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Post by Valandil on Aug 15, 2004 5:33:20 GMT -5
Actually, I haven't been here in a long time or else I would have commented. . .I've been uh. . ."busy". .. with things. But now I'm not, because it's Sunday. . .and I have nothing to do on Sunday's, I just sit around all day on the computer. Yeah. Oh, about the story.
I think it might be able to be good. . .if it was alittle longer. . .more detail, you know, that good stuff. Maybe a story line, better characters. But since you didn't, GET A LIFE.
Happy?
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Post by MovieManiac on Aug 15, 2004 7:13:15 GMT -5
No. You just insulted me. How dfo you think i feel?  |
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Post by Valandil on Aug 15, 2004 9:47:07 GMT -5
I think my post before yours explains exactly how I think you feel. . and in case you're too lazt to look, I think you're happy. So there.
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Post by MovieManiac on Aug 15, 2004 14:01:25 GMT -5
lmao, i know. im just SCREWIN with ya.
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Post by Valandil on Aug 29, 2004 11:52:26 GMT -5
Good, you'd better be, I dont' want to have to come after you! Haha. . . ;D I'm just joking around. But seriously. . .you should write some serious stories. And by that, I mean they can be funny.. .but like an actual story, not a paragraph or two, you know what I mean?
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Post by JAGuar on Aug 29, 2004 11:54:58 GMT -5
Well, he is working on the revised Wizard of Oz.
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Post by MovieManiac on Aug 29, 2004 15:39:49 GMT -5
Actually, that fell through the roof. So ill work on a story later
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Post by Valandil on Aug 29, 2004 21:10:50 GMT -5
It was a good beginning, but it would very difficult to re-write something like the freaking Wizard of Oz.
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Post by MovieManiac on Aug 30, 2004 15:33:44 GMT -5
actually, i had it all planned out, because i kno that book and movie, but i have a short attension span when it comes to writing
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