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Post by LadyintheShadows on Feb 2, 2005 17:19:20 GMT -5
A mirror to the self
A rose to the lover
A hand for the helpless
In a lost world
Sometimes all we can do
Is remember mirrors
And roses
(AN: not the best, but I came up with it on a spur of the moment type of thing)
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Post by JAGuar on Feb 2, 2005 17:34:48 GMT -5
Oh wow, that actually had a nice message. Not one of the most captivating things I've read, but I think it's the first one I've read that I actually understand, and that's what it's about, right? Getting the message across. Anyway, it was awesome, I agree totally.
I give it an 8 out of 10.
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Post by LadyintheShadows on Feb 3, 2005 17:10:52 GMT -5
Thanks Jag. ;D
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Post by Member26 on Feb 7, 2005 8:30:45 GMT -5
ehhh...it was all right.
where's madawhatsherface?
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Post by JAGuar on Feb 7, 2005 12:13:06 GMT -5
How could you not like it? It wasn't the norm and it was still about something real. It was not only awesome, but fawesome.
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Post by Member26 on Feb 9, 2005 8:36:53 GMT -5
that's nice, but you still haven't answered my question.
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Post by JAGuar on Feb 9, 2005 18:18:46 GMT -5
I have no idea where she is. Apparently people don't like to come here anymore. Although if I could get them to see the new board just once, they might become more interested. Although, a board can't change as easily as the look of it.
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Post by Maddik on Feb 14, 2005 13:28:29 GMT -5
Yeah, what he said, whatever the hell it means.
Very good poem, it didn't feel like you were trying to force the rythm of it.
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Post by LadyintheShadows on Feb 16, 2005 15:13:57 GMT -5
Thanks Jag for your awesome support of my poem, and thanks to others who complimented it. I appreciate it! ;D
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