Please don't, Please do

[LadyintheShadows]

Don't cry for me
I'm not worthy of your tears
Don't scream for me
I'm not worthy of your fears

Please cry for me
I'm not worthy of your tears
Please scream for me
I'm not worthy of your fears

Cry for me?
Am I worthy of your tears?
Scream for me?
Am I worthy of your fears?

What can I do
To prove to you
That I need your tears
And your fears
Because you are my love
Sent from above

[JAGuar]

Yeah, not too sure what to think of the poem. It just seems kind of random to me. I don't know.

I do give it a 7 out of 10 though.

[LadyintheShadows]

See, that's the thing...it's kinda supposed to be random. Like it's the randomness of someone who doesn't know what to think, but wants to think everything at once, if that makes any sense. Thanks for the rating an everything.

[JAGuar]

Oh, okay. I still give it a 7, but at least now I understand what approach you're taking though.

And if you were to take that approach, I think maybe you should find some way to make it more obvious that you're trying to make it totally random. I don't know how you would do this, but it would probably help. Remember, you never want to confuse the people who read your poems.

[LadyintheShadows]

True. I'll try to remember that. Thanks. ;D