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Post by JAGuar on Jul 11, 2003 17:48:54 GMT -5
Okay, okay. I know I told you all that I had my stories planned out already. I lied, though. I have the Dermian Saga(Man, I need to think of a better name for that,) and Next Dimension stories created, but not the other two. So, I'm gonna try to do a story like the Richard Meyers one on the general board. Here it goes. ________________________________________________
It was just another normal day at the pentagon for General Shark when a computer technican came running into his office.
"Sir! I'm afraid we have a problem!" he shouted out as fast as possible.
"What is it, Rogers?" Shark asked impatiently, though he'd never admit it, he was taking a nap before waking up.
"Well, sir," started the tech named Rogers, "We have confirmation sir. There's aliens flying towards earth. They're passing Mar's orbit and we don't think they want peace."
"What makes you think that?" asked Shark unconvincingly seeing as how these so-called "aliens" were usually the government's satellites.
"Well sir," Rogers started, "They told us." This caused the general to stare in amazement. Satellites definitely didn't tell people what they were doing.
"Let's go." He said getting up from his chair.
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Post by Valandil on Jul 11, 2003 18:03:59 GMT -5
Alright, it was nice, but it needs to be longer. that was like a trailer tease to a movie or something, but good. ;D
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Post by JAGuar on Jul 11, 2003 20:34:09 GMT -5
Huskarl, the idea is for everyone to do a little tiny part a piece. I just made it that long because I knew that you guys had to know what I want to happen in this story. At least the over-all general effect anyway.
~JAG~
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Post by Valandil on Jul 15, 2003 23:51:19 GMT -5
O, sorry. _____________________________________________
When they got to the command room, there were four people standing around. There names were Lance, David, Will, and Jon. They were refered to as the "Gang".
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Post by JAGuar on Jul 16, 2003 0:40:41 GMT -5
The one with the ripped left sleeve of his jacket stood up to talk.
"What's going on, Shark?" He asked abruptly.
"Nothing," started Shark, "Listen Sharp, we need some help now with "government" business."
"Government business?" asked John Brown standing up and was easily the least trained fighter. "but I'm not in the government. Why'd you call me?"
"Actually," started the General, "I need all of you."
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Post by Maddik on Aug 7, 2003 4:57:02 GMT -5
"Gentelmen, this is a very serious issue."
"I am sure you all already know this. As do I already know this." Said the General in a serious tone.
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Post by KWG 14 on Oct 12, 2003 15:49:51 GMT -5
when a man walked in to the room
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Post by JAGuar on Oct 12, 2003 16:38:38 GMT -5
They all stared as the man kept walking into the room and leaving and walking back in again.
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Post by Jackie89 on Jul 6, 2004 16:54:11 GMT -5
nice~air force~hehe ;D
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Post by JAGuar on Jul 8, 2004 16:29:59 GMT -5
They all stared at the man like he was retarded.
"What?" He asked shrugging his shoulders, "I was just saying that the United States Air Force is nice."
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Post by MovieManiac on Jul 21, 2004 14:27:14 GMT -5
All the men started lughing to death (not actually dying though)
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Post by JAGuar on Jul 21, 2004 14:34:03 GMT -5
"And now back to serious matters." General Shark said.
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Post by MovieManiac on Jul 21, 2004 14:49:53 GMT -5
General Shark turned to the giant screen above them. "The UFO will arive to Earth in aboot 36 secs at the rate its traveling." he said. "aYou boys do whatever it takes to calm down whatever is inside."
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Post by JAGuar on Jul 21, 2004 15:16:10 GMT -5
"May I suggest something?" The tall one interjected, "We should probably introduce ourselves."
"Okay..." Shark started, "Will, John; John, Dave; Dave, Sarah; Sarah, Jo; Jo, Lance; Lance, Brent; Brent, Will-."
"I think we get it, colonel." John said.
"Oh, sorry."
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Post by MovieManiac on Jul 21, 2004 15:22:20 GMT -5
Suddenly the ship crashed right in front of the base. The Generl ran towards the wreck and was turned into dust by an invisible force.
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